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05-22-2006, 09:44 PM
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A new short tune...
I've posted a draft of an idea I've been kicking around for a little while. I'm not sure if I'm going to extend it, but I know it needs a few transitional notes here and there. Its the first song on my music page. Any constructive criticism is welcome as usual. I recorded it with my Masterbilt DR-500R.
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05-23-2006, 07:04 PM
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I take it this one s*****. LOL. Back to the drawing board!
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05-23-2006, 08:10 PM
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Don't jump the gun, yet. Give it time ! Besides, if nobody takes the time to listen and/or to comment doesn't mean that the music is not good. If you believe in the tune, then, it doesn't really matter what anybody thinks.
I kind of like the beginning. I would probably continue in that mood. Use it as a theme, expand it, come back to it, expand it again... Many times a thought will return to it's origin. 
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05-23-2006, 08:40 PM
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Barry, try to think more of a melody line than just making chord changes. Maybe even just work up a single note melody line and then put chords to it to make it work. You can get away with not much of a melody line if you have a great rhythmic beat going on but usually one needs some identifiable tune to get their interest going. You play "Over The Rainbow". That is a great melody if there ever was one. Think about that one and how it is put together.
Rick
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05-23-2006, 08:57 PM
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05-23-2006, 08:58 PM
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