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Song for songwriting competition!
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I'm going to join a competition and the song is almost done. It just need a bit more rythm stuff and some mixing. Maybe a bit more tweaking, but I would like to hear you honest opinions Im not the best singer but it is fun making songs anyways Here it is: https://soundcloud.com/jonas-finn-larsson/twenty-five Also you can't make instrumentals in this competition and thats sucks, but hey singing is fun too! I usualy make instrumentals. |
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Very nice! If I could offer a suggestion it would be to increase the tempo.
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Thank you. I'm redoing the verse because the singing is shaky. And yes the tempo could be faster but I have no inspiration to redo everything haha :P But I will keep this in mind in future songs. Its good advice thanks again
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If you decide to increase the tempo, it would be interesting to hear the result. Best of luck Jonas! - Glenn
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Can't remember why but I think I heard this before ? Maybe you tube alert anyway from a poormans perspective.... I guess my question is what is the mood your trying to set ? From that move on to the tempo the others mention .
From my side if it's writing from a personal point of view then the tempo is good as is but maybe try to keep the vocal solo no chorus makes it more personal . Excuse my failure in not studying your lyrics so I hope I make sense if not just ask and I can clarify . Keep at it and good luck
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I don't understand why you knock your singing; it's good!
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Thank you! I actually improved my singing while writing this song. It's just that i've always believed I dont have a good singing voice. It still lingers so i'm not so secure with my voice.
But your comment made me more secure |
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I'm glad you like the tempo, I'm beginning to like it too! People have different taste! Like Sigur Ros has very slow songs. |
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Hi Jonas,
The song, words, and guitar playing are fine. There is nothing wrong with your singing. Any notes you may feel you are having trouble with in that song are certainly in your range. I feel that I would like to hear a lot more emotion in the playing and singing. Sometimes it is good to sing a song pretending to be angry, sad or happy just to see what style works best. Contrast the singing style between soft and loud, light and heavy. I feel your song has lots of potential with some emotion behind it. Regards, John |
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