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Old 08-04-2013, 06:58 AM
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My friend Brian McMullen and I worked on this one together. Feedback is always appreciated.

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Very nice! I enjoyed listening to this one.
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The intro sounds like Lifehouse. Love the melody and the vocals which fit the song perfectly. Really enjoyed it.
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you did a knockout job on this one.

it has a very subtle balance

and the whole production is smooth and professional.
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Old 08-04-2013, 10:54 PM
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Wow, thank you for the compliments. It's great to have a forum like this to share.
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I meant to comment on this tune earlier, and forgot. Thank goodness I found it again and liked it just as much.

I really like everything about the song! I usually find that most songs (originals that are posted) seem to run too long. In this case, I'd like to hear one more verse! I don't think I've ever said that about any other tune. Really good job all around, and think about my suggestion.

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Thank you Mark. I'll work on that idea. I posted this just a couple of days after we started it. I have a hard time usually on multiple verses. The idea and first verse comes easy but then adding to that and bringing it home is a struggle. I really appreciate your feedback.
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