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07-01-2019, 12:17 PM
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My Best Bad Advice
This was hastily recorded but it's my first attempt to write a song. I'll get around to doing it a bit better at some point.
https://soundcloud.com/mark-beech-72...est-bad-advice 
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#2
07-01-2019, 12:31 PM
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I will listen to this for you. For whatever reason I have noticed no one responds to written original songs here. I have posted 2 here and gotten a ton of looks but not a peep. Not sure why that is....
Anyways, If you include a lyric sheet I can critique the song better. I will say this the hook /TITLE is really good. My best bad advice is a great TITLE. You got a great TITLE now you gotta flesh it out. Nice TITLE to work begin working for a first song....
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07-03-2019, 06:45 AM
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Lyrics
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Go fast and take chances make bad decisions and play with matches drink too much and act the clown Get high and don't come down If i told you the truth, they would criticize But this is my best bad advice Break the law but don't get caught The best dance moves are always self taught Burn the candle at both ends because life is short and full of dead ends If i told you the truth, they would criticize But this is my best bad advice Spend your money the day you get paid You're going to need it so learn some first aid If you cant afford it buy it anyway Don't be afraid to party on a week day If i told you the truth, they would criticize But this is my best bad advice Even when life made me sweat I did all these things without one regret but i'm being serious when i say don't be a fool throw that tide pod away If i told you the truth, they would criticize But this is my best bad advice
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