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06-15-2011, 05:41 PM
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Deadbeat Dad - Country Tune
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06-15-2011, 07:15 PM
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Very neat, knuckle. Your song lyrics are always entertaining and insightful; always a twist of humor and reflection. Good stuff!
Thanks for sharing with us.  Bel isi, -kyle
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06-16-2011, 06:07 AM
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Nice Job. Dark, but life ain't all daisies and pixie dust.
In the chorus, my ear sorted of wanted to hear "Stayin in the middle is the best you can do" and then "You lost the best things, but you never knew" Just an idea, but I think that will make those lines flow with the other lines in the chorus and then again at the end of the song. Nice job on a GOOD song, you have a cool playing and vocal style. (no cellphone ringing like an engine this time  ) Like I said, Chris Knight meets John Prine and them boys is country!!
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