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06-22-2012, 10:33 AM
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Fingerstyle tune..
This is a little song I've made for my nephew! I know it's not flawless but the feeling was there.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=axGM94fcutw Merel 
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06-22-2012, 11:06 AM
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Recorded and played well. However I would like to hear more song development melody in your tunes.
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06-22-2012, 12:51 PM
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Impressive! I agree with Derek here, a bit more development might be in order. Your playing is excellent, the video and sound quality is very nice indeed! Thanks for sharing Merel!
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06-23-2012, 09:46 AM
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Merel, are you a fan of guitarists such as Mississippi John Hurt? Your technique reminds me a bit of his style.
It's a nice idea but as a fellow fingerstyle player I really think you could develop the rhythm or at least vary the chord progression a bit, since you're technically playing it in C try adding some more chords like B or even Eb to spice it up a bit or at least change the rhythm a little. Just my suggestions, you're still doing great and I look forward to seeing where you'll go in the music world
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#7
06-23-2012, 04:13 PM
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Nice Job Merel. I like the rhythm of your fingerstyle in this song. I can say with the other comments, develop a melody line; otherwise it sounds like rhythm for another lead player to add melody. I admire your skill level and dedication. Keep it up girl! Ed
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06-23-2012, 05:30 PM
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I absolutely loved this..... flat out
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