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Circus Daze - Original song on J-45
Gday folks,
When we had our last bushfires down here I heard a bloke interviewed on the radio.He was about to evacuate his house and was talking about 'what to take and what to leave behind" That phrase stuck in my head as a lyric hook and ended up in this song i wrote.It's in open G. Hope you take a listen and let me know if you like it. Cheers http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IhC3q...vHgM6GffzUhRGQ Circus daze She bought herself a ticket To see the man with the blue guitar No one thought to tell her That he plays the way things are And he played her and Jimmy And he played Jim and Jane When the bridge of sighs starts sighing Nothing stays the same Circus days are over Packing up the sign Not so much what you’re taking It’s what you leave behind Had her turn inside the lion’s cage With a monkey on her back Figured that would shave her odds Sweet logic drowned in that Cause Daniel came here last week Extracting every thorn In a land of kings and sawdust Not much mercy going on Circus days… Sentimental things to touch Sentimental things to burn Smoke hangs over Sydney She drinks more than she earns Fire up the mountains Aunty Sue leaves Uncle Jack Gumtrees spit and splinter ‘aint no turning back Circus days…. They bought themselves a ticket To see the man with the blue guitar No one thought to tell them He plays the way things are Jugglers drop their place in time Sentry falls asleep Catapults and somersaults Never found her feet Circus days are over Packing up the sign Not so much what you’re taking Its who you leave behind |
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Nice job. Has a real Noel Gallagher sound to it. You been listening to Oasis a lot?
Thanks for sharing - enjoyed it. Ed
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Ed thanks very much for commenting.Just a happy coincidence about the Noel Gallagher likeness.I quite like them when I hear them but they aren't on my playlist. I think Wonderwall is the only song I could name.
But I had a little listen after your comment and yea I can see some comparisons. Thanks again. |
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Circus Daze - Original song on J-45
I like it and the lyrics are good. Thanks for sharing.
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Really enjoyed that FB. That was gooood. The lyrics are great.
Rock on! Steve
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Very well done. Great voice and that J45 sounds fabulous.
Rb |
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Good song. Great lyrics.
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But maybe edit the song. I do like it, but could be too long. My first drafts of songs often get cut down by 30-50%, makes the song MUCH more effective.
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Mr Red thank you for your support.
Steve, glad you like the lyrics...I respect your opinion as you always pick lyrically interesting songs to perform...cheers mate. Roger B you are too kind.I'm glad I chose the J-45.I wrote this on a uke - believe or not. Was going to record it as a uke song and changed my mind. PC very good point you raised. After I recorded it I thought it was a little long. I could easily leave two choruses of " circus days...." out and tighten it up.Thanks for the good tip.I know myself I tend to have a 4 minute listening limit on original songs by unknowns on the net.But at least it wasn't an Edmund Fitzgerald Cheers again everyone. |
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