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"Midnight Train" - a new original song
Work tape from last week. The lyrics (below) have changed a bit since then.
https://soundcloud.com/user-99202317...rk-tape-9-1921 "Midnight Train" - David Pennybaker I board that midnight train / No bags, nothin’ to pack Ain’t got no ticket / Ain’t no one gonna ask Pullin’ out of the station / I can’t help but feel I deserve all I’m gettin’ / Made one hell of a deal Barely enough light / Lookin’ ‘cross the abyss I start thinkin’ about / All the things I’ll miss Laid out before me / Endless miles of track The decision is final / I won’t be comin’ back In my former life / Was always on the run A hazard of my trade / The trigger end of a gun Can fin’ly slow down / Kick my boots off and relax Ain’t nobody chasin’ me / No need to watch my back The last thing I remember / Besides the noise and smoke Arms wrapped around me / Overpowered and choked Lookin’ from above / Can’t believe what I seen My bruised and mangled body / Danglin’ from a tree My life played out before me / I offered no excuse Judgment here is cruel / Here it won’t be the noose Here I’m doomed forever / To ride this ghostly train No one to hear my thoughts / No one to share my pain |
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You got it going on with this one! Good job!
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Thanks!
Gonna go back to my original title on this one, I think: Ghost Train |
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Cool, this one is ripe with production potential well beyond guitar and vocal well done
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