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The Palace - Original song
New original song posted.
Had enough of silly love songs? http://www.reverbnation.com/open_graph/song/14442988 |
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Good one mate! Prine, Kristofferson vibe...like the languid sounding guitar work too.
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Good one Terry! IMHO if your stories tell songs then the listener won't get bored with similar themes. Of course that just IMHO as a ballad writer One thing that I would suggest is that the line "in that run down whiskey bar they call the palace" To my ear, as a focal point of the song, the line ends abruptly or too quickly. My ear wants that line to be extended by extending the a few words. In that run down whiskey barrrrrrrrrrrr they calllllllllllllllllllllllllll the palace. Something like that. Maybe you could try some other ideas. Cool song, enjoyed it.
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Glad you enjoyed this song. Thanks for comments! The languid sounding guitar work is not for everyone, but when it works, it works. I was glad to hear from you.
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It's always good to hear from you, we've developed a good writer's friendship. T |
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Good story, Terry and I love the road-worn tone of your voice in this song. Nice pickin' too!
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You're too kind, Terry! I wish I felt the accomplishment, but like so many others here in Show & Tell I'm just a hobbyist having fun with music. I sure do appreciate the props though because it helps make this hobby even more gratifying than ever. I really enjoy hearing what other folks, both the pros and hobbyists on AGF, are doing with their music and I am both awed and inspired by most of them. Your unique stories and impassioned deliveries are among the posted songs I look forward to hearing.
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I agree 100% about hearing so many gifted players and singers on this forum. To me it not only seems awesome and inspiring, but once in a while intimidating!! Lots of really good stuff!! Thanks for the support. |