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Old 11-01-2005, 04:21 PM
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I'd love to get some comments on some of my music, in particular one called Run Away (instrumental)...http://www.soundclick.com/atlus

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Jack

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Old 11-01-2005, 04:39 PM
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I see four songs, none of them is called 'Yesterday'. (?)
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Old 11-01-2005, 04:52 PM
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Whoops! I changed the name to Run Away!
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Old 11-01-2005, 05:23 PM
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I would love to hear the vocals over the changes. Your guitar, IMO, sounds a little bit to 'pick-up-ish', I personally like a more natural guitar sound. But then, it's a personal preference. Anyway, let's hear the vocals and how everything blends.
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Old 11-01-2005, 05:51 PM
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Hi there,
I'd love to get some comments on some of my music, in particular one called Run Away (instrumental)...http://www.soundclick.com/atlus

Thanks
Jack
I think the songs are good, but it sounds as though the mic(s) are being impacted in some way to the beat of the music.

Could you be stomping your foot to hard and maybe causing it to vibrate the mic(s)?

Other than that and what Bern said about the acoustic, it sounds good...
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Old 11-01-2005, 09:59 PM
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I agree about the percussive impact on the mic - it really comes through hard on my headphones, but the tune is great!!
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Old 11-02-2005, 05:59 AM
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Thanks for all the feedback.
I recorded that using a Gibson Chet Atkins SST...which explains a lot :P
No really...it's a lovely guitar for live performances, but just not good at all for recording. Which is why I'm in the market for a new Acoustic...
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