Amateur feedback

[Newbie10]

Hey everyone

I've posted this already on the "record" section. But I was advised to put it here for better feedback ^^

So yea, any feedback ( negative or positive) will greatly be appreciated!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HGPPlY95HmM

[Jusca]

What do you think you'd want to improve after watching your video?

My own ears tell me articulation could be better. Some passages come off as muddled together and difficult to hear the notes like around 1:18-1:20 mark. Sort like a person mumbling...you know you hear something but aren't quite sure what the person is trying to say--only in this case it's musical mumbling.

Some finger movement seems excessive and lacking control with the pull- offs in the beginning.

[Newbie10]

Originally Posted by Jusca

What do you think you'd want to improve after watching your video?

My own ears tell me articulation could be better. Some passages come off as muddled together and difficult to hear the notes like around 1:18-1:20 mark. Sort like a person mumbling...you know you hear something but aren't quite sure what the person is trying to say--only in this case it's musical mumbling.

Some finger movement seems excessive and lacking control with the pull- offs in the beginning.

Sorry for the awfully late reply, was very busy during the week

I want to improve my tempo. I can't seem to tell at certain parts when I should rush things, and when I should slow it down a bit. Obviously my musical theory knowledge is very low. I mainly rely on my ears to remember certain sections of Estas Tonne's "Golden Dragon" song.

So I try to make up for it by playing excessively, and disregarding the golden rule that states that "being slow and accurate, is more important than being fast and sloppy"

I've been practicing the song itself at a very slow pace, but when I get down to it, I just wanna play it fast for some reason, it's like I lose control, which is quite silly and shouldn't happen.

[TBman]

Originally Posted by Newbie10

Sorry for the awfully late reply, was very busy during the week

I want to improve my tempo. I can't seem to tell at certain parts when I should rush things, and when I should slow it down a bit. Obviously my musical theory knowledge is very low. I mainly rely on my ears to remember certain sections of Estas Tonne's "Golden Dragon" song.

So I try to make up for it by playing excessively, and disregarding the golden rule that states that "being slow and accurate, is more important than being fast and sloppy"

I've been practicing the song itself at a very slow pace, but when I get down to it, I just wanna play it fast for some reason, it's like I lose control, which is quite silly and shouldn't happen.

The hardest part of playing guitar is the patience it takes. Keep it up, play slow and steady. Speed will come on its own. We all tend to rush things.