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Sharing an original: Still the Stone
Sharing an original that I wrote and recently performed live.
Genre: Folk/Americana, Singer-Songwriter Lyrics: November always comes too early But this one hit a little bit hard Sunday drive through the Lakeside Hills In an empty get-away car. I'm still the stone You always knew Come rain or fire Come love or blues There's a neon sign That's never on Outside a heart It's been closed too long Through the dusty glass you'll see nothing changes here for me It's just the same black and white the goes on and on and on... I'm still the stone She said I wish I could fight like you do For something you're so sure is right But I don't know what I want anymore I just knew it was time for me to say goodbye Now the rock's been rolled away From a tomb that sealed the fate Of something once so good That went so wrong But look at us here we are I said you steal the lie That you've always used To sell your soul And pay your dues You'll be alright But you best move on To another short hat To another short song And when I get off that train I'll get off alone And I won't feel a thing Cause I'm still the stone
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I like this a lot. Originals with lyrics are pretty rare around here, and for me this is one of the better efforts. Something I'm often guilty of is being too on the nose with what I'm trying to say, so I appreciate a little ambiguity. For example, I'm not sure I get exactly what you're talking about in the lines "But you best move on to another short hat, to another short song," but I understand the overall meaning perfectly. The "short hat" got me thinking, and that's always good.
I'm not sure I expressed myself very well here, but bottom line, that's a good song.
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Love the Title...Would like to see it used a little more throughout the song...
Keep on writing
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Thanks for giving it a listen and for the comments and suggestion.
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Wayne J-45 song of the day archive https://www.youtube.com/playlist?lis..._Zmxz51NAwG1UJ My music https://soundcloud.com/waynedeats76 https://www.facebook.com/waynedeatsmusic My guitars Gibson, Martin, Blueridge, Alvarez, Takamine |