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Old 11-14-2017, 08:07 PM
vibrolucky vibrolucky is offline
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Default Great feedback from last post - here's the final version!

Thanks for all the great feedback to my first 'real' home recording. Main riff is a 1971 Martin D18, there are two other rhythm parts with a newer D28 as well. Here's the 'part deaux' more polished version.

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Old 11-14-2017, 08:54 PM
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Very well done. Love the diff from the first part with the fingerstyle to the much more dramatic part with the added effects and instruments. Superb work. Great guitar creativity and vocals are stellar too. Keep going with this as if you were not. You have some very good talent there. And forgive me for that comment if you already are under contract and sell millions of records a year. I just think its great music.
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Old 11-14-2017, 11:29 PM
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Great improvement, especially with the guitar parts. I still think the back beat could be cut in half during the verses. Excellent job.
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