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Nice song, nicely done, Jax; I enjoyed it. Nice introdution of harmonies at "we'll always be alone." My only critique is that the bass guitar often rushes the beat, just a fraction, yet in other places, it's behind the beat a tad. Perhaps it's a tracking thing, playing technique, or artistic liberty.
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Guys.......
I doubt Jax is still looking for critiques on this one considering the thread is from September of '08.......... He doesn't post here very often and I doubt he will even be aware this thread got resurrected. |