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Old 03-21-2013, 10:26 PM
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Hello. Finished another original tune...

The Way It's Always Been

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Old 03-22-2013, 01:58 PM
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Hi @Bobsmart , I like it, very nice. One original song it's worthier more than one thousand perfect covers.
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Old 03-22-2013, 06:47 PM
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Hi @Bobsmart , I like it, very nice. One original song it's worthier more than one thousand perfect covers.
Thanks very much.
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Old 03-22-2013, 08:20 PM
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Really liked your song. Your playing reminded me at first of Iron and Wine but then your vocals were more Richard Julian or Jeff Black. The only thing I didn't like was the effects on your vocal for the tag line at the end. You added compression(?) and the line "the way its always been" got lost in the mix, to my ears. Great song, writing, melody, performance every thing great!
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Old 03-22-2013, 09:00 PM
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Great Job Bobs Art...(there went that silly M key again)...I think that this is the second tune I have heard from you, and I enjoyed it as much as the first!!!
Kudos brother...and thunderous applause!!!
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Old 03-22-2013, 10:01 PM
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Really liked your song. Your playing reminded me at first of Iron and Wine but then your vocals were more Richard Julian or Jeff Black. The only thing I didn't like was the effects on your vocal for the tag line at the end. You added compression(?) and the line "the way its always been" got lost in the mix, to my ears. Great song, writing, melody, performance every thing great!
Hi, @tcanova. Thanks so much for the feedback.
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Old 03-22-2013, 10:10 PM
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Great Job Bobs Art...(there went that silly M key again)...I think that this is the second tune I have heard from you, and I enjoyed it as much as the first!!!
Kudos brother...and thunderous applause!!!
Thanks so much, @Claytone! I really appreciate you taking the time to listen and comment. More stuff on the way. Take it easy.
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Old 03-23-2013, 05:21 AM
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Bob, very well written and nicely performed! I enjoyed that.
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Old 03-23-2013, 06:32 AM
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Up way too early and was glad I ran into your tune! I really enjoyed it and thought the reverb vocal fade fit with the tunes structure (actually made me smile). Nice job!
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Old 03-23-2013, 08:29 AM
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I've listened to this a few times...at first I felt it was over "effected"...while I still think that the vocal and playing don't need quite the same "production" for me it is a great song with good sentiment and well performed..

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Old 03-23-2013, 03:56 PM
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Bob, very well written and nicely performed! I enjoyed that.
Thanks so much. Always appreciate your tunes as well.
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Up way too early and was glad I ran into your tune! I really enjoyed it and thought the reverb vocal fade fit with the tunes structure (actually made me smile). Nice job!
Hi @RoseAdi. Very glad to hear that. I was up way too late putting it together. Happy you liked it. Take care.
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I've listened to this a few times...at first I felt it was over "effected"...while I still think that the vocal and playing don't need quite the same "production" for me it is a great song with good sentiment and well performed..

Cheers, Andrew
Hi, Andrew. I appreciate the feedback.
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Old 03-23-2013, 10:22 PM
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Nice work, Bob. Very pleasant.
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Old 03-24-2013, 02:06 PM
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Nice work, Bob. Very pleasant.
Thanks very much, Peter. Appreciate the feedback.
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