Should I continue with this original?

[Mr. Dave]

Originally Posted by mikeyG

Hey thanks Dave and Strummer, I see exactly where you guys are coming from! I really tried to make a bridge lmao butttt I just couldn't seem to figure one out so I worked with what I had =/ maybe next time I guess..or maybe if I figure one out down the road I'll change it!

Thanks a lot for the comments guys, keep them coming, I really appreciate it!

Glad to, Mike. A song ain't finished 'till you say it's finished.

[JimmyJam923]

Mikey, cool song, much better!! good job!!

[mikeyG]

Haha that is very true Mr. Dave! Thank you veryy much Jimmy