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Your lungs don’t love it though.
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I think the other photo you posted with you in front of the fence was better than these. Hey, you asked.
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Martin D-13E (2021 MiM) Last edited by LeDave; 08-01-2020 at 05:13 PM. |
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I really like it - nice job. Just for comparison, I cropped out some of the negative space which helps the viewer focus on the subject, and I think intensifies the photo making it more of a portrait and less of a landscape...
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Thanks! i edited the pic again to remove the rough skin on the top right of my head and the hanging hair on the bottom left of my chin.
EDIT: I just edited again to add a larger light reflection on my eyeball.
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I like this one so much better, including the out of focus background. I now see you as the main subject as opposed to the cigarette and guitar.
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Nice. Can you darken the fence over your right shoulder, the right side of your face, your neck and your chin? And as before, ditch the cigarette. I'd also include a little more negative space next to your right elbow for better balance with the right side of the picture...
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I like the halo effect going on over you too, especially if you could lighten the upper part of your face a little where your hat is casting shadow.
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The B/W on post 52.
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Thanks guys for the ♥️ and the criticism.
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I like the black and white, but the cigarette has to go big time.
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