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Old 09-20-2019, 11:17 AM
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Default First Love, Last Love (Full Studio Version)

Here is the Finished Product of a song I wrote....You guys may recall I posted an simple Acoustic/Vocal Version of this. I decided to go all in on this....I sing the lead VOX & lend a hand to the female background vocalist in spots I felt needed beefing up.

Here is the Final Studio version.



First Love, Last Love
© 2019 Steve Altonian

Moonlight dances upon your hair
Your eyes light up the sky
I slip your hand inside of mine
You hold me tight and smile a little smile

I feel your heart beating underneath my skin
I kiss your tender lips and whisper in your ear

First love, last love
Sharing dreams and memories
First love, last love
Sometimes baby, love is meant to be

I’ve come to call you my best friend
You’re a candle to my soul
A yellow rose in the desert snow
I have grown from the seeds you’ve sown

Girl you know me a bit better than myself
You gently show me exactly who I am

First love, last love
Sharing dreams and memories
First love, last love
Sometimes baby, love is meant to be

BRIDGE
Still can taste that first kiss
It gets sweeter and sweeter all the time
You’re my favorite song
My love keeps burning strong…….for you

First love, last love
Sharing dreams and memories
First love, last love
Sometimes baby, love is meant to be
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Old 09-23-2019, 02:51 PM
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Hi Steve,

Wow, that came out sounding very professional! Excellent song, great hook, excellent vocals, and a great sounding production. I am very impressed!

Way to go!!!

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Old 09-23-2019, 03:26 PM
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Here is the Final Studio version.




Absolutely beautiful song and production buddy. Loved it. Well done.
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Hi Steve,

Wow, that came out sounding very professional! Excellent song, great hook, excellent vocals, and a great sounding production. I am very impressed!

Way to go!!!

- Glenn
Hey Glenn....I appreciate the feedback & the listen....Thanks
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Wow, that sounds absolutely radio ready, or stream ready, or however the music business works these days. But very professional sounding!

Really well done...

-Ray
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Old 09-24-2019, 12:50 PM
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I've only been on AGF for four days and I'm already beginning to feel WELL out of my depth! Absolutely stunning performance and production. I'm in awe. Congratulations on a great job.
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Great stuff! I love when I can sing along to a song I've never heard before. :-)
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Old 09-26-2019, 08:03 AM
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Woa.. This is frikken awesome. Nothing NOT to love here.

when you say you went all in, you aint kidding...

Great work Steve!
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I've only been on AGF for four days and I'm already beginning to feel WELL out of my depth! Absolutely stunning performance and production. I'm in awe. Congratulations on a great job.
I appreciate the listen & the feedback. We all take a journey musically & it only gets better as you walk down that journey.

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Wow, that sounds absolutely radio ready, or stream ready, or however the music business works these days. But very professional sounding!

Really well done...

-Ray
Ray,

I thank you for the great word....
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Great stuff! I love when I can sing along to a song I've never heard before. :-)
Yeah, that is like the ultimate compliment...Thanks....my UBER driver this morning who does rap, was singing the Chorus the second half of the first CHORUS

Gotta love that
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Woa.. This is frikken awesome. Nothing NOT to love here.

when you say you went all in, you aint kidding...

Great work Steve!
I really appreciate the feedback...thanks
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