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Old 06-04-2018, 09:12 AM
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A re-recording of a song I wrote a few years ago. It's still not where I want it to be, but I'm getting closer,



Guitar: Larrivee OM-05

Tuning: DADF#AD, capo 2

Recording gear: Zoom H-5, built in mics

Environment: 20x16 carpeted room

DAW: Audacity (post processing spike edit in Adobe Audition 1.5)
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Nice tune Barry!
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Nice tune Barry!
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Really pleasant, Barry!! Liked it a lot. As I listened, my "ear" wanted to hear a bridge or refrain right at :57 which would compliment the original A section and final B section.
Just thought I'd mention as it seems like you may be still developing........lovely sound and choice of chords/melody!
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Really pleasant, Barry!! Liked it a lot. As I listened, my "ear" wanted to hear a bridge or refrain right at :57 which would compliment the original A section and final B section.
Just thought I'd mention as it seems like you may be still developing........lovely sound and choice of chords/melody!
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Thanks Fred.

I think you are right. Thanks for the suggestion!
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Very nice Barry!
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Nice melody, Barry. Peaceful, well played. I like it!
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A re-recording of a song I wrote a few years ago. It's still not where I want it to be, but I'm getting closer,



Guitar: Larrivee OM-05

Tuning: DADF#AD, capo 2

Recording gear: Zoom H-5, built in mics

Environment: 20x16 carpeted room

DAW: Audacity (post processing spike edit in Adobe Audition 1.5)
Now that's acoustic guitar perfection.

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Nice melody, Barry. Peaceful, well played. I like it!
Thanks Larry!
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Like that one a lot, Barry. Thanks
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Wonderful sound. Interested to hear how it turns out!
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