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04-09-2019, 10:56 AM
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Original
https://soundcloud.com/user-81899606...ing-18/s-utNPt
An original that I didn't really take the time to play perfectly and the back half is somewhat improvised and sloppy. lets hear the comments 
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#2
04-09-2019, 02:25 PM
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Sounds alright. Eliminate the first 1:10 and add some more variation to the rest and you are doing ok.
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#3
04-10-2019, 08:44 PM
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I enjoyed listening to that, Robby. Real nice melody in the middle section, the part in 3/4 time. The intro is interesting, but I'm also not sure what it has to do with the rest of the tune. I hear hints of Cat Stevens "Moonshadow" melody around 3:40 to 3:50 or so, "and if I ever, lose my hands...."
Nice work!
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#4
04-10-2019, 10:13 PM
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Thanks for the compliments and also the critiques
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