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Old 12-15-2005, 07:08 PM
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Default "Faces" original, first verse done, will add chorus soon

I wrote this song a few days ago and recorded it down at the studio real quick. This is just the first verse, i'm in the process of writing a chorus but have not have time because of finals.... The song is about an idea i have had for a long time that we all wear different "faces" or masks and act differntly in differnt occasions. As Dave Matthews said, "sometime i find it's easy to be myself and sometimes i find it's better to be somebody else". This idea has always intreagued me so i thought i would write about it. The song also deals with the idea that when we change ourselves we don't always like what we have become so we try to get rid of this new persona we have created and start over and try to find ourselves agian... ANyway, tell me what you think, i'm playing all the guitar part, tell me what you think of the little intro, ive played with it for a little while and really like how it sounds. enjoy...

http://s37.yousendit.com/e.aspx?id=1...31DAXM3DPW67E6

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Old 12-19-2005, 03:14 PM
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any takers on some criticism, there's alot...
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Old 12-21-2005, 08:49 AM
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Would love to hear it but I think your link is broken. Keep getting an error message.
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Old 12-21-2005, 08:52 AM
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Here is what I'm getting:

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