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2 New Songs..please listen buddies
Hey guys I recorded two songs nd I was hoping I could get some feedback, tips and tricks and such.
Heres the link for the first one. http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?PID=1016664&T=3009 Its kind of fast and poppy Heres the second one http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?PID=1016666&t=8515 It's kind of jazzy and poppy. Any tips or tricks or feedback I love it. See ya later. |
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Listened to the first one. A couple comments:
Very inventive. The gypsy-jazz type chord pattern is catchy. It clues the listener to some fun to follow. It's cool to mix a dark theme into a lighter music pattern. Gives sort of a tongue-in-cheek aspect to the song. But I think the vocal delivery should be more light and punchy to match up with the musical frivolity of the acoustic guitar part. Also the electric guitar part has a little too evil of a feel to it. I think the whole thing should be light and punchy. In this case and acoustic lead would be more consistent. And always remember, I don't know what I'm talking about. Take it or leave it.
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Ahhhh. The second one has a nice consistent feel. Cool too. Nice presentation. A little tightness in the vocal when you get up high. Work on breath support and try to keep it light and relaxed (and maybe punchy) throughout your range.
Great song.
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