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01-29-2015, 07:53 AM
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Steer me right - Lewis Armitage (c)
hello, please have a listen to my new original track on my new demo, you can find it here https://soundcloud.com/lewisarmitage...steer-me-right (c) all rights remain to the artist.
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#2
01-29-2015, 08:02 AM
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Let me be the first to welcome you to the AGF
You will find plenty of folks willing to help you. Just ask.
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1957 Gibson RB-150 5 string banjo. Bought it new & I still have it. 1983 Yairi - Alvarez DY 73 1992 Taylor K-20 1993 Yair - Alvarez DY99A 2001 Yairi-Alvarez DY-91 SOLD! 2002 Taylor Stock 810 Ltd. 2003 Taylor 855e 2003 Taylor 814ce Fall Ltd 2003 Tradition Jerry Reid Sig. Telecaster 200? Esteban American Legacy (New Owner Lake Chautauqua Lutheran Center)  
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#3
01-29-2015, 08:08 AM
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Hi, Lewis, and Welcome. Here are my thoughts...
The song has a nice feel to it, but the tuning issues with the guitar were quite off-putting. Everything is magnified when recording, so those things really need to be paid attention to very closely. Also, the strumming is a bit clunky. I'm not saying I don't like the song, but simply offering feedback for growth. Keep at it and keep working hard. 
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#4
01-29-2015, 08:39 AM
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no worries, thank you for giving it time!
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#5
01-29-2015, 08:54 AM
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Hello Lewis and welcome.
Speaking as the world's foremost authority on what I like, I can assure you that I really liked it. I feel that you may want to investigate a tuning that will allow a big low bass note on your tonic chord - especially if it is to remain a sparse arrangement featuring the guitar. Well done.
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Sobell Model 1 Sobell six string archtop Gibson ES-165 Herb Ellis Eastman John Pisano Gibson Johnny A Franklin Prairie State Collings D1A
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01-29-2015, 10:22 AM
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ok, taken on board, thank you!
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