Youve definitely got the beginning of a nice picking and vocal melody there Solo.
Now you just need to smooth out the picking pattern so its fully solid along with the vocal melody, but as you said its just a first attempt, so now you can fine tune it and also work on a chorus to give the song some variety.
Keep it up, I think youre definitely onto something there !
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