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Originally Posted by Misha Ramaniuk
Thanks rick-slo and Glenn!
Could you explain why you don't like the composition? It could be useful for composing my future tunes.
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It's a matter of my own personal preferences. Other will disagree with me.
I generally like melody driven compositions and longer phrasing, and ones centered around definitive major or minor keys.
I had an issue with the long period of mainly sus chords, few tension and release setups, and a low amount of song development. Much of the treble line used seem driven by what guitar technique was employed (I call that "guitar centric" composing) rather than musically driven.