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Old 07-05-2010, 04:24 PM
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Default New Original: "Emily and Mr. Neil"

Had a lot of fun writing this one. It has a bit of a light jazz flavor and I set a rule for myself when writing the lyrics - I had to state things as indirectly as possible, while still providing enough details so that the listener is able to understand correctly what is going on. It's been through three re-writes.

There are a few clams and clunkers in the recording, but what I am most interested in is if I managed to get the story across. Please tell me what you think is going on in this story.

Of course comments and critiques re any aspect of this piece are welcome too.

So here, without further ado, is Emily and Mr. Neil
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