Don't jump the gun, yet. Give it time ! Besides, if nobody takes the time to listen and/or to comment doesn't mean that the music is not good. If you believe in the tune, then, it doesn't really matter what anybody thinks.
I kind of like the beginning. I would probably continue in that mood. Use it as a theme, expand it, come back to it, expand it again...
Many times a thought will return to it's origin.
