That's a hard arrangement. To cut down the time gap that exists in some chord changes, as Rick pointed out, you might want to
1. Consider transition notes
2. Change some of the full chords to triads that still carry the melody.
I think its better to "dumb things down" to get something entertaining for a listener. You can always work on the harder version at your leisure.
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