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Originally Posted by Guitar Slim II
I really think you should take one more pass at measure 4. As I said, the second triplet makes a lot more sense if written as an ornament with grace notes on the second note -- and nothing else. As it is now, it looks nice but it is not readable -- and probably not accurate no matter how you slice it.
A properly written ornament would say it all to a good reader, and that's how it should be written, IMO.
Something like this: (Note, the spacing is a little too wide in this example. You could try putting the grace notes closer together and closer to the B.)
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Is there a better way to write it without that ornament?
Because I talked to the tattoo artist and he mentioned they would have to redo my "repeat and fade," which I wanted him to do anyway using a more stylized font. But he said the writing was too small and cramped for them to accurately tattoo, at least that's what I inferred from what was said.
So, that ornament might be a little TOO small to tattoo well.
I told him I might need to make changes and he said to let him know ASAP if I do.
Total damage: $250