I've been working on this song for a few months but am not really been happy with it yet. I haven't really found a tune or instrumentation that I like with it so I just used this simplified version. That way, I at least have something to fine tune the lyrics with.
Anyway, I sang it at an open mic last night to get crowd reaction. One of the local performers liked it so much that he asked if I could send him the lyrics because he wants to start playing it in some of his gigs. Go figure...
I've since made one or two word changes but you'll get the idea. What are your thoughts? What changes would you make?