[AJRed]

Nice, I think this version is much better. You might try a vocal harmonized box to thicken the tone of the voice. I'm going to get one when I start playing out. I don't have a good voice so I need something. I mean folks use tons of pedals and effects to improve the tone of a guitar, why not the voice.
That and what you hear is yourself and that uber nice Taylor harmonizing. When you record through two mics you break that apart and without lots of eq'ing and production it may not fully mix optimally back to a harmonic area that is pleasing. I'm listening on anIPhone so I never sound good on one.

You're working through it and that's commendable. Keep it up and it will result in a nice payout.

Chicks dig it!!!