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Old 08-30-2008, 01:49 PM
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Default A new song recorded raw. "Safer Inside"

Thought I'd share this one...very raw, but heart felt.
It's geared toward the ladies but hopefully all will still enjoy.

Let me know what you think!?!
It's called "Safer Inside"

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Old 08-30-2008, 02:15 PM
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Excellent song. Your voice has great character, and compliments your playing very well. Would love to hear the end product!!!
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Old 08-30-2008, 02:32 PM
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Very nice.
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Old 08-30-2008, 02:34 PM
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What do you mean 'raw'?...leave it as is...excellent in all aspects...wouldn't change a thing.
BTW, in your other songs I hear some excellent songwriting as well.
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Old 08-30-2008, 02:41 PM
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Aaron i just listen to the other songs and i must say WOW very mellow stuff i love it. I am a fan already.Good stuff..
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Old 08-30-2008, 02:42 PM
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Who writes your songs??
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Old 08-31-2008, 10:48 AM
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Nice job, singing and playing.

Good listening music!
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Old 08-31-2008, 11:23 AM
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Thanks guys...I write my own stuff.
I'm kinda liking the raw feel...very personal feeling.
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Old 08-31-2008, 03:45 PM
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Well done, Aaron!
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Old 08-31-2008, 03:58 PM
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it's so hard to write such a simple and catchy songs but with character and soul. I'm stunned!
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Old 08-31-2008, 06:49 PM
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Thanks for the compliments! I'd love to get back to writing more often...I'm working soo much to pay bills...don't have much time.
Please, share these songs with others...maybe I'll be able to get something rolling with the music.
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Old 09-01-2008, 09:55 PM
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Default Great Job.

Good tune, really enjoy the guitar lick, lyrics are good paints a good pic...I could see it in a T.V. show at like a dramatic build up the camera cutting to different people throughout the show etc...maybe you should send it to some T.V. studios...guy at my school got his song on Laguna Beach somehow.

N E can't wait to listen to the rest of the stuff...pay the bills but don't shy away from this music!
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