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09-15-2017, 02:45 AM
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"Translucent" original
Good morning,
i would like to indroduce a new piece: "translucent". I hope you enjoy listening. I´m very thankful for your comments and suggestions on composition, pLaying and recording! Thanks for listening! https://youtu.be/Hrr3sme2OoE 
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#2
09-15-2017, 04:13 AM
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Good playing Andre. You have a good recording tone to your guitar.
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#3
09-15-2017, 05:09 PM
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Nice job Andre! I enjoyed that!
- Glenn
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09-20-2017, 03:25 AM
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Thank you Glenn and Barry for your encouraging comments!
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09-20-2017, 09:31 AM
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Sounds good and well played.
Lately you have written a lot of what I would classify as mood music. Compositionally I would like to hear chord progression wise more tension and release set ups, less use of melody arising seemingly secondarily out of the use of ascending and descending chord patterns. Usually I like to hear music with melody the driving force, or at least the use of a memorable hook or two. Maybe the outcome would not be mood music but something to consider IMO.
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#6
09-25-2017, 01:24 AM
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Thank you Rick for the useful suggestions! I appreciate them very much!
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