Is it any good? New song

[Jonas - Lalaldd]

Hi

I haven't been writing songs much too long so i'm still noob.

Listen if you like is it any good?

https://soundcloud.com/jonas-finn-la...m-here-6-slask

[David Hutton]

I liked it. Am now listening to some of your other songs.

[JoeCharter]

Originally Posted by Jonas - Lalaldd

Listen if you like is it any good?

Yes, most definitely.

There's a few glitches along the way but I really like your style and I think this is good material with great potential.

[Jonas - Lalaldd]

Originally Posted by David Hutton

I liked it. Am now listening to some of your other songs.

Thanks David again! Nice to know that someone is listening

[Jonas - Lalaldd]

Originally Posted by JoeCharter

Yes, most definitely.

There's a few glitches along the way but I really like your style and I think this is good material with great potential.

Great that you think it has potential. I will keep practising writing song.

THanks Joe!

[delaorden9]

Yes , it sounds good, keep it up and posting

[Jonas - Lalaldd]

Originally Posted by delaorden9

Yes , it sounds good, keep it up and posting

Thanks for listening I will post more when i get more inspiration

[duluthdan]

Anybody tell you that your voice sounds very much like Aaron Lewis. Some nice lyrics in here - sing it out with the power you know you have !

[Trillian]

Nice playing, you have a very pleasant musical voice. I liked the melody and arrangement. I didn't catch all the lyrics but I caught the gist and I often listen for mood more so than lyrical content. The mood to me was a little haunting, it drew me in. Good luck! I'm kind of in the same boat as you, but less experienced.

[Jonas - Lalaldd]

Originally Posted by duluthdan

Anybody tell you that your voice sounds very much like Aaron Lewis. Some nice lyrics in here - sing it out with the power you know you have !

No one has told me that, everybody has said that i can't sing pretty much. Aaron Lewis has a really nice voice. I must train more to sing with his kind of power!

[Jonas - Lalaldd]

Originally Posted by Trillian

Nice playing, you have a very pleasant musical voice. I liked the melody and arrangement. I didn't catch all the lyrics but I caught the gist and I often listen for mood more so than lyrical content. The mood to me was a little haunting, it drew me in. Good luck! I'm kind of in the same boat as you, but less experienced.

Hey man thanks! I would love to listen to some of your songs aswell!

[Trillian]

Originally Posted by Jonas - Lalaldd

Hey man thanks! I would love to listen to some of your songs aswell!

I don't have any! Well I have one (1) now, but it's not recorded yet. When I said I was less experienced I by gollies meant it! I did make a Sound Cloud account though with the intention of getting my song (and hopefully more) up, I'll let you know when I do.

[Jonas - Lalaldd]

Originally Posted by Trillian

I don't have any! Well I have one (1) now, but it's not recorded yet. When I said I was less experienced I by gollies meant it! I did make a Sound Cloud account though with the intention of getting my song (and hopefully more) up, I'll let you know when I do.

Yes please let me know! Going to record a few songs at my friends house soon.
Some with singing and some instrumental. Gonna be fun! It is really nice to record a song and make it your own. It is a very pleasant feeling!