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12-16-2008, 03:22 AM
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My first song!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aU6BD...e=channel_page
I was looking to get some feedback concerning this little sketch. This is my first time attempting to "write" something and it was pretty challenging overall. This is by no means a finished piece. I'll use the feedback I get here to change things up and post it again -- hopefully in a more cleaned up and musically sensible form. THANKS EVERYONE!! 
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12-16-2008, 11:13 AM
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Nicely done. I dig the overall rhythm and use of harmonics. Nice tone too!
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12-16-2008, 12:41 PM
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Brian, That is really good!! I especially like the change at 2:06 The song is very soulfull and beautiful!! great work!!
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12-16-2008, 03:33 PM
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Very nice groove you set up--your playing is very loose but precise at the same time. I don't know how you guys do that kind of stuff, with all the percussion and harmonics..... Your technique is excellent!
The end caught me a bit by surprise. I thought it might resolve back to the opening riff again or that it still had somewhere to go when it just sort of ended.
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12-16-2008, 05:07 PM
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12-16-2008, 05:17 PM
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12-16-2008, 05:29 PM
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.....Nice......
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12-16-2008, 06:13 PM
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Brian, nice playing, and I really enjoyed the song. May I make a request? Next video, please include your head...just a personal pet peeve of mine is watching a headless guitar player on youtube!! It's like watching just the feet of a dancer, as if only the feet are involved in dance!!
 If you're shy and don't want to reveal your face, wear a hat pulled down over your eyes, wear large sunglasses, or even a paper bag, but show a whole human playing the guitar.
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12-16-2008, 07:04 PM
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Last edited by usb_chord; 12-17-2008 at 08:48 AM.
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12-16-2008, 08:41 PM
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Great stuff, Brian. I like the moodiness of the piece and how it evolves into a groove that had me nodding my head to the beat. I wanted it to go on longer and to have a decisive ending. I look forward to hearing the "finished" work.
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12-17-2008, 12:16 PM
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First song, huh? I could listen to an entire album of playing like that. Better get to work, Brian. You only have 9 songs to go for your first 10 song CD.
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12-17-2008, 04:35 PM
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That's a great song, love it. Really great overall feeling to it. If that's your first attempt at writing - I'm looking foreward to your next songs! It really starts out like you want to hear the whole song.
What guitar is that, by the way?
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12-17-2008, 05:42 PM
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The guitar is a custom shop Taylor GA (Sinker Redwood/ Braz)
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