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Old 08-01-2008, 12:18 PM
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Default New instrumental track

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I am at a loss for a real title yet, so as of right now it is just called Lap Jam. It should be at the bottom of the six songs posted.

Take a listen and let me know what you think.

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The sound is good but IMO it needs a melody or another hook or two to maintain interest. That should be easy to do.
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Old 08-01-2008, 12:35 PM
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The sound is good but IMO it needs a melody or another hook or two to maintain interest. That should be easy to do.
Rick
Well the other feedback that I have gotten from friends is that it needs words, but I have no clue how I would fit words into that song. Maybe some tribal wailing...kidding. I could hear a possible organ line, but don't have an organ or keyboard... nor do I know anyone who plays.

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