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07-30-2008, 01:57 PM
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Carol
Im worried about the verses in this song im working on can someone give me thier thoughts about it?
I met this girl about year ago her and i didnt know how easy it was to just fall in love We hung out about a month or two her and i figured out how easy it was to fall in love and all ive got to sayX2 Is that i liked her oh carol i liked her I liked herrrr alot. yea i liked her After awhile it went to far her and i didnt know how easy it was to Give it all up a little later we broke up her and i figured out how easy it was to give it all up And all ive got to say all i have to say is still i liked her oh carol i liked her i liked herrr alot yea i liked her And now that we are though i realized breakin up was just a mistake carol carol carol i want you back and all ive got to say all ive got to say is that i liked her oh carol i liked her i liked herrrr alot yea i liked her 
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07-30-2008, 02:24 PM
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Please, forgive me, my native language is not English...
Is the phrase, 'her and i didn't know', correct ? Shouldn't it be 'She and I' ?
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There are still so many beautiful things to be said in C major... Sergei Prokofiev
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07-30-2008, 02:42 PM
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And any song titled "Carol" is going to have a tough time erasing memories of Neil Sedaka's classic, "Oh, Carole." We'd need to hear the lyrics SUNG too, to see if there's any more "there" there poetically.
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07-30-2008, 08:29 PM
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yea i was planning on getting the demo up sometime soon. i was looking for ways to get it off my phone. i recorded it on a misson trip to Mississippi in my small sleeping area if not ill do a quick version. and i think ill change it to she and i
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