New original song! Hope you enjoy!

[Jonas - Lalaldd]

Here it is:

https://soundcloud.com/jonas-finn-la...ill-be-alright

Please tell what you think!

[richnrbq]

I like it a lot! I particularly like your opening riff, with the half-step, major seventh thing happening. The structure and melody work well too. In some ways, I'd love to hear a more direct vocal sound. The song has intimacy that might be even moreso with a plainer vocal treatment. Good job!

Great Jonas!

[Jonas - Lalaldd]

Originally Posted by richnrbq

I like it a lot! I particularly like your opening riff, with the half-step, major seventh thing happening. The structure and melody work well too. In some ways, I'd love to hear a more direct vocal sound. The song has intimacy that might be even moreso with a plainer vocal treatment. Good job!

Thank you! That riff is nice even though you are only changing one note. I'll consider doing a more plainer vocaltake on it. Thanks!

[Bobboy]

Quite nice. Regarding the vocal, it sounds kinda like some type of chorus effect is used -- you've got a reasonable voice and I think it would sound better recorded without effects.

[Brucebubs]

I thought it was great.
Original and well done.

[Glennwillow]

Hi Jonas,

Nice job on that! Very original sounding; very pleasant to listen to!

- Glenn