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New original-feedback
Only the second song I've ever wrote...feedback appreciated!
"Leave This Town Behind" https://soundcloud.com/bluesguy1963/...is-town-behind |
#2
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Really nice! Your voice is really suited to the tune and lyric. I think a short bridge might fit nicely as well. Great job!
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Bob https://on.soundcloud.com/ZaWP https://youtube.com/channel/UCqodryotxsHRaT5OfYy8Bdg |
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I appreciate your time...I did feel like it maybe needs a little something else but like I said...I'm brand new to this songwriting stuff.
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Well keep it up, this is a great start I heard something around 1:30 that made me think a bridge or instrumental break was coming up...maybe you were doing some sort of chord substitution at the end of the verse. Your voice is very pleasing
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Bob https://on.soundcloud.com/ZaWP https://youtube.com/channel/UCqodryotxsHRaT5OfYy8Bdg |