'Dirty Work' - Steely Dan

[ThermiteTermite]

[rokdog49]

I'd like to hear you slow it down more like the original but you did a good job.

[ThermiteTermite]

Point taken, I will get back to you on this one.

[rokdog49]

I just think with your vocals being smooth sounding, you would be taking advantage of that. See if you can put some emotion in those vocals, you have a pleasant enough voice.
Just some suggestions. Take 'Em or leave 'Em.

[ThermiteTermite]

Thanks for the suggestions Rokdog. Here is another shot at it.

[bickb]

The last is definately better! Nice work.

[rmyAddison]

Hi,

Some constructive criticism............big Steel Dan fan....

It sounds like you're playing the same first two chords for the first and second phrase, they are not the same, many online tabs have them wrong too.

In Am the correct chords are

Am Dm G C
F Bb C G
Am Dm G C
F Bb C Dm

Chorus

C F Am Bb

I'll let you transpose to Em, good practice. You have a nice tone, hope you take this as well meaning constructive criticism.........

[ThermiteTermite]

So you're telling me..

'Go back, Jack, and do it again?'

I'll get right on it, unfortunately you may have to listen to it again too lol.

[ThermiteTermite]

Here's another shot at it with the correct chord progression.