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Old 02-07-2015, 05:35 PM
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I've been working trying to make songs more interesting than just strumming along so here's an attempt at trying to pick a melody line between verses. I know it's not perfect but feel free to provide suggestions / critiques.

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Old 02-07-2015, 07:09 PM
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I've been working trying to make songs more interesting than just strumming along so here's an attempt at trying to pick a melody line between verses. I know it's not perfect but feel free to provide suggestions / critiques.

what is that I hear. Progresss my friend

very cool. levels seem a tad low might be able to boost them. Also might want to bring the vocals a little more forward. thats just my imo. Sounds good. sending you a PM
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Old 02-08-2015, 05:26 AM
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You have a great voice. Not pitchy... Guitar was great. Nice song and well done.
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Old 02-08-2015, 12:08 PM
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I admire your attitude about introducing change to your music. That's the only way to keep forward progress.

I wouldn't be too concerned about mistakes. One strategy I use is to slow things down. It's important to feel everything you're doing.

Don't forget that pro studios are constantly tweaking everything. Your voice is much better than mine. I discovered that I sounded much better coming through a pitch correction box.

This song sounded great. Reminds me of the old jams with my buddies.

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Old 02-08-2015, 06:12 PM
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Thanks for the kind words!
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