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Old 09-10-2014, 02:50 PM
N_O_VATER220 N_O_VATER220 is offline
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Default my version of RED HOUSE

this is a version of red house i made up. hope you like it.


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Old 09-10-2014, 02:52 PM
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the vocals arent that great because i did it at 3 in the morning and i didnt want to sing louldly and wake my apartment neighbors
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Old 09-10-2014, 11:13 PM
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I think this is super! I like the vocals a lot (don't know why you say they aren't that good), and your guitar playing is very clean and has a fine flow.

I think the only thing I'd recommend is a bit more variety: add some more filling leads that have some different elements, maybe add a bass run, and bring in some slight variations on the vocal delivery. What you are doing with the guitar and vocal is impeccable and very tasty...but my ears wanted some surprises after a couple of minutes, and they didn't get them. So while I kept appreciating the skill of what you were doing, my mind began to wander a bit, making up some fills in my head and "playing along with you" in my head, rather than simply listening. With a bit more variety, you will be COMPELLING.

Well done!
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Old 09-11-2014, 09:56 PM
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I agree with buddy. Awesome vocals, awesome playing. It's fine as is for home jamming but vary the fills a bit and you got yourself a certified blues winner.
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Old 09-11-2014, 11:06 PM
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Dig it. Nothing at all wrong with the vocals either.
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Old 09-13-2014, 12:32 PM
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great vocals, awesome production set up . I missed some guitar but your performance is superb
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Old 09-13-2014, 01:30 PM
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Love it! For my ears the level/amount of instrumental variety was fine.
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Old 09-15-2014, 07:42 PM
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I wish i coukd sing that well!

Curious about your recording chain....love the tone you're getting,

What are you playing?
How are you recording it?
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Old 09-16-2014, 07:23 AM
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Beautiful version!

So atmospheric and absolutely natural.

Grat Joe!
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