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my version of RED HOUSE
this is a version of red house i made up. hope you like it.
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the vocals arent that great because i did it at 3 in the morning and i didnt want to sing louldly and wake my apartment neighbors
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I think this is super! I like the vocals a lot (don't know why you say they aren't that good), and your guitar playing is very clean and has a fine flow.
I think the only thing I'd recommend is a bit more variety: add some more filling leads that have some different elements, maybe add a bass run, and bring in some slight variations on the vocal delivery. What you are doing with the guitar and vocal is impeccable and very tasty...but my ears wanted some surprises after a couple of minutes, and they didn't get them. So while I kept appreciating the skill of what you were doing, my mind began to wander a bit, making up some fills in my head and "playing along with you" in my head, rather than simply listening. With a bit more variety, you will be COMPELLING. Well done! |
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I agree with buddy. Awesome vocals, awesome playing. It's fine as is for home jamming but vary the fills a bit and you got yourself a certified blues winner.
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Dig it. Nothing at all wrong with the vocals either.
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great vocals, awesome production set up . I missed some guitar but your performance is superb
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Love it! For my ears the level/amount of instrumental variety was fine.
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I wish i coukd sing that well!
Curious about your recording chain....love the tone you're getting, What are you playing? How are you recording it? |
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Beautiful version!
So atmospheric and absolutely natural. Grat Joe!
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