YES! No doubt you've seen the semi-improvised acoustic version that Gilmour did with the full band and Rick Wright at Abbey Road, yeah?
Love this. Excellent composition and performance. My only suggestion would be to bring it way down at the beginning of the third(?) verse (~2:40). I feel like that would add some intensity and accentuate your voice and lyrics as it builds back up. (Not sure how that would fly on a busy street corner, though.) Oh, and the peter-out ending is great.
Jealous that you have a pub gig!
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